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So glad I finished this, I almost didn't because I didn't like the original composition. I'm so happy with it now though C:

A larger image of this can be found on my WYSP (Da doesn't let you view large on your profile if its bigger than 900px )

www.wysp.ws/post/697681001/

Edit fixed the weird highlights, collar bone, added some shadows, the head shape, arm wrist and armpit!
Thank you for all the feedback 

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

try to make the shading a bit darker and dont make the background so plain also try to make the boobs acrually show it kinda looks like a flat model. There are also some problems as some of the background is in the body. You could also try to add slme detail into the hair as it is quite flat. It looks like the right eye has no eyebrow so i would try to make it more thick like the left eye. One last thinhg add some lighting and the color should be based of the color of the background.